UN Human Rights Treaties

A/C.3/32/WG.1/CRP.1 24 October 1977
ORIGINAL: ENGLISH
Thirty-second session Agenda item 85
UNITED NATIONS DECADE FOR WOMEN: EQUALITY, DEVELOPMENT
AND PEACE
DRAFT CONVENTION ON THE ELIMINATION OF DISCRIMINATION
AGAINST WOMEN
LIST OF AMENDMENTS AND NEW VERSIONS PROPOSED WITH RESPECT TO THE PREAMBLE AND ARTICLES OF THE DRAFT CONVENTION ON THE ELIMINATION OF DISCRIMINATION AGAINST WOMEN, CONTAINED IN THE SECRETARY-GENERAL'S
REPORT A/32/218 and Add.1
PREAMBLE
Paragraph 1 - none
Paragraph 2
UNESCO a new paragraph to be added after paragraph 2;
(doc. A/32/218 - Annex I)
Paragraph 3
USSR (amendment) - doc. A/32/218 - Annex I
Byelorussian SSR a new version of paragraph 3 (doc. A/32/218 - Add; 1
paragraph 9)
Paragraph 4 - none
Paragraph 5
Byelorussian SSR
and Ukrainian SSR amendment (doc. A/32/218 - Add. 1 paragraph 10}
USSR amendment (doc. A/32/218 - Annex I) ,
77-20340

Paragraph 6 - none
Paragraph 7 - none
Paragraph 8
Ukrainian SSR amendment (doc. A/32/218/add. 1 paragraph 12)
USSR 3 amendments (doc. A/32/218 Annex 1)
Byelorussian SSR new version - (doc. A/32/218/Add.1 paragraph 13)
Paragraph 9
Ukrainian SSR amendment (doc. A/32/218/Add, 1 paragraph 15)
USSR amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Paragraph 10
Sweden an amendment and a new paragraph to he added
(doc. A/32/218 Add. 1 paragraph l6)
UNESCO an amendment (A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 1
Netherlands amendment (doc A/32/218 Annex I)
UNESCO two amendments (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 2
Introductory phrase
USSR amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Byelorussian SSR new version (doc. A/32/2l8/Add. 1 paragraph 19)
Article 2, paragraph (a) ,
Austria amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
UNESCO amendment (A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 2, paragraph (b)
Austria amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Japan amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)

Article 2,paragraph (d)
UNESCO amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 2, paragraph (e)
New Zealand amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
United States of
America amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 2, paragraph (f)
UNESCO amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 3 - none
Article 4, paragraph (2)
UNESCO amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 5
Austria new version (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 5, paragraph 2
Sweden amendment (doc, A/32/218/Add.. 1 paragraph 23)
United States of
America amendment (doc. A/32/218 paragraph 46)
UNESCO amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 6
United Kingdom new version (doc. A/32/218 Add, 1 paragraph 25)
Article 7
Argentina amendment (doc. A/32/2l8/Add. 1 paragraph 26)
Article 8, paragraph (a)
UNESCO amendment (doc, A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 8, paragraph (~b)
Austria amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)

Byelorussian SSR amendment (doc. A/32/2l8/Add.l paragraph 27)
USSR amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 9, paragraph 2
Austria amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 10
Introductory phrase
Argentina amendment (doc. A/32/218 Add. 1 paragraph 35)
United States of
America amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
WHO amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 10, paragraph (a)
Austria amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
UNESCO new version (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 10, paragraph (b)
Japan amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex i)
UNESCO new paragraph to be added (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 10, paragraph (c)
Austria amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 10, paragraph (e)
UNESCO amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 10, paragraph (f)
Argentina amendment (doc. A/32/218 Add. 1 paragraph 37)
United Kingdom amendment (doc. A/32/218 Add. 1 paragraph 38)
Article 10, paragraph (g)
New Zealand amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
UNESCO additional article on cultural rights

Article 11
Introductory phrase
Argentina amendment (doc. A/32/2l8/Add. 1 paragraph 40)
Article 11, paragraph (l)
WHO amendment (doc. A/32/218 paragraph 87)
UNESCO new version (doc. A/32/218 Annex I) .
Article 11, paragraph 1 (b)
Argentina amendment (doc. A/32/2l8/Add. 1 paragraph 4l)
Article 11, paragraph 1 (c)
United Kingdom amendment (doc. A/32/218 Add. 1 paragraph 42).
Netherlands new paragraph to be added as paragraph 1 (g)
(doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 11, paragraph 2 (a)
Japan amendment (doc. A/32/218 paragraph 93)
Article 11, paragraph 2 (b)
Japan amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
United Kingdom amendment (doc. A/32/2l8/Add. 1 paragraph 43)
UNESCO amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 11, paragraph 2 (c)
Austria amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Japan amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
New Zealand amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
WHO amendment (doc. A/32/218 paragraph 98)
Article 12, paragraph (b)
New Zealand amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
WHO new version (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)

Article 13, paragraph 3
United States of
America two alternative versions of the paragraph are proposed
(doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
UNESCO amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 13, paragraph 4
Netherlands amendment (doc., A/32/218 Annex I)
UNESCO amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 14, paragraph 2
UNESCO amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 15, paragraph 1 (d)
Argentina amendment (doc A/32/218/Add. 1 paragraph 54)
Article 15, paragraph 1 (e)
UNESCO amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 15, paragraph 1 (f)
Bahrain new version (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 15, paragraph 1 (g)
UNESCO amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 15, paragraph 1 (h)
Japan amendment (doc. A/32/218 paragraph 132)
Article 15, paragraph 3
UNESCO new version (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article l6
UNESCO new version (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
ILO new version (doc. A/32/218 paragraph 143)
A new article to be added
United Kingdom (doc. A/32/2l8/Add. 1 paragraph 56)

Article 17, paragraph 2
USSR amendment (doc. A/32/218 paragraph 145)
Article 18 - none
Article 19, paragraph 1
UNESCO amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 19, paragraph 2 (a)
New Zealand amendment (doc. A/32/218 paragraph 154)
Article 19, paragraph 3
Norway amendment (doc. A/32/218/Add. 1 paragraph 6l)
UNESCO amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)
Article 19, paragraph 7
UNESCO amendment (doc. A/32/218 Annex I)